i can't help it, it's the genre

i can't help it, it's the genre

 

 

 

metaphorically speaking,

i love you.

 

figuratively speaking

i dance in your moonlight

 

literally speaking

your touch is on my bucket list

 

silently speaking

i hope you notice me

 

because i love you

metaphorically, figuratively, literally

 

and silently.

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/11/19

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Love that figurative part the most. The ways we find to express love... this one really speaks to me, Jacob. Nicely penned.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Yumna...
j.

[Mary]

Love can be expressed in so many ways, and you have certainly done it beautifully in this poem

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Mary,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

love this it takes me to another realm, of relativity so to speak figuratively.
ps loved it!!!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Julie,
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Deviation is good...figuratively speaking.
Writing outside the bounds almost feels like colouring outside the lines...can be a bit messy, but still puts colour on the page.

Good one, j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ted...your response is a poem in itself.
j.

[barleygirl]

Your writing is extra-popping lately! This one is so thought-provoking, I can't capture all the ways I can relate. I wonder how many people are harboring secret crushes that play out similar to this? I think most of us are doing exactly this *sigh!* Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i appreciate your review, Margie...thank you.
j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

my muse has decided to be a bit more playful lately with the rhyme etc...not that often it happens for me.
j.

[Fran Marie]

The beauty of this little gem is its simplicity .there it is..as i wrote it. type poem..love this one..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Fran,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another flowing piece on unrequited love declared in a punchy, clever and most readable verse Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John...
j.

[Tinabells]

jussstttt wowww!!! I love this!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Tina,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

This reads two ways the love of poetry and the love of someone special, the genre indeed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, andrew,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

This poem is clever Jacob, also different from your usual style. It has great appeal on an emotional level, has warmth, imagery and brevity which says a great deal. Great work.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris,
j.