it's in the splatter

it's in the splatter...

 

 

sinister collaboration

thoughts in confused reticence

like devious gnomes

adhere to reckless keys

 

dubious delivery

of decadent denotations

turned covert connotations

 

spun in secretive exposure

lacking any sense of composure

 

an aberration

of incontinence 

producing uncomfortable poems

with arduous ease.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/9/19

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I'll say wow as well. Your use of language here Jacob is sublime, so articulate. That final stanza impacts heavily. It's all in the results, and the poems speak for themselves. "Producing uncomfortable poems with arduous ease".

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Chris.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow, This is indeed the most eloquent critique of an artist I have ever read Jacob. 'Uncomfortable poems with arduous ease?'

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John. Very kind words from you.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Aye was hoping I was not in the cross hairs!