2=1

2=1

 

intrinsic geometry

of algebraic intentions,

 

i love your angles

90 degrees smitten

we make perfect parallel lines

and when our lips finally meet

there will be signs and co-signs

of an obtuse emergence of passionate logarithms 

that will lead us into infinity's imaginary number

only worrying about one equation's truth

 

2=1

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/23/19

Reviews

[Cassie]

wow..this is good, you are very brilliant, how can poetry be equal to mathematics

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Cassie.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love another of your poems Jacob! This is so good and flows perfectly with the allegory.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John,
j.

[Autumn L Gibbs]

Sooooo cute! Your a better math teacher than the one I have at my school.:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Autumn...
j.

[Autumn L Gibbs]

Your welcome, Do you ever write other things besides poems? A.G.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

pretty much just poetry....don't have the attention span for longer...tried 4 different novels but couldn't stick with any of them.

[Autumn L Gibbs]

Well keep writing your poems, I like them. I write poems, songs, short stories, and currently writing a book.

[Chris Shaw]

You make maths sound so interesting Jacob. I thought I wasn't any good at it, but maybe I was underestimating myself. Two can become one in matters of the heart. Great read.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

I do like this poem. Math is life and you made math life, Jacob. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Coyote...
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[lightsong]

and that's TRUE MATH! how unique this piece is, and yes in love there is symmetrical science the scene of making love can be a glorious painting and a perfect geometric shape too, and these words just the proof about it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Light,
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

And 1=0....the circle is completed- perfect equation of balance and different angles permit us to be free to be ourselves as true balance in love overcomes all🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, Kelly,
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure🌹

[h d e rushin]

clever my friend. Looking back, why did I have to take algebra 2 anyways in high school? How did those two hour session in a hot classroom, looking out the window help with any major motives for metaphor? This is beautiful/..dana

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, dana,
j.

[Mark Mendoza]

A very clear image of something lovely. Mathematics being a clever representation of something of higher knowledge, greater understanding. Thank you for sharing . A great poem with your unique signature.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are kind, Mark, thank you,
j.

[kentuck14]

YO! I hated math . . . especially the higher forms. However, I get this. Wish my old algebra teacher had put it like this up on the blackboard! I might have gotten a passing grade. Yeah, it's said all reality can be worked out with mathematical equations. Can't you just see that guy with the "beautiful mind" writing this on the library window?! Great poem J. I also enjoyed reading the various reviews!!
Tom

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like that reference to "beautiful mind" ---made me imagine him writing a math based poem...would be pretty technical i am sure.
thanks for the words, Tom,
j.

[kentuck14]

you are welcome.