transaction

transaction

 

 

resolutions discarded

promises sought out in payment

justification of insensitivity...

 

(delinquent funds of the heart)

 

and with so little interest

an apathetic credit card

with a higher emotional spending limit

is an oxymoron of sorts

 

just when i almost touched you

you closed your account

and i was left with no balance

to the paradoxical way i feel.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/18/19

Reviews

[Moonie]

Haha didn't know even transactions could be romanticized into a relationship allegory. I think you've used just the correct expressions to connect both.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review,
j.

[john l smith]

you certainly have an accomplished way with words but unfortunately, my simple mind does not have as fluid a grasp on their intent
But it sounds romantically underfunded

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"romantically underfunded" would have been a perfect title...ha ha....thank you for your words, john,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My goodness Jacob you have found so many ways to describe the bitter loss of love in such amazing allegory. They are always filled with valid descriptions and captured emotions.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are a kind reviewer, John...
thank you.
j.