indeterminate language of us

indeterminate language of us

 

 

give me nothing of you

and will still feel like i have everything

even just the little somethings you reserve

those could be anything i desire to capture

 

when all things are taken into consideration

i at least had a glimpse

of that one thing we could have been.

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/16/19

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Wow, this is so powerfully spoken. You see possibilities in nothing? Your words give me the feeling of a dandelion head being blown into the wind and a bystander capturing one tiny parachute from the whole. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

Chrus

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Chris.
j.