an artist's rendering

an artist's rendering

 

 

outside the lines,

the sketch is pressing hard upon my heart

drawing circled emotions 

in askew remnants

 

inside the words

chaotically cursive

foul language of broken shards of you

 

like a shattered window

that needs compensation for its pane

 

my pencil is dragging

the page

a poor representation

of how you made me feel

 

when my fingers were more nimble.

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/9/19

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

Metaphorically speaking, no one comes close to you, Jacob. It's a talent you exude that I've long admired, and it just seems appropriate to tell you from time to time, so that you never forget what a gift it truly is - that YOU truly are!

"My pencil is dragging
the page
a poor representation
of how you made me feel."

...bingo!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

You are such a kind soul, Kelly....thank you for your words,
j.

[Neville]

fine art springs to mind..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Neville...i like that..
j.

[Neville]

I guess that makes me an art critic :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You certainly know how to paint in the impressionist style with a mere few words Jacob. I saw an elderly painter by his easel, his head hanging as he lacks inspiration while reminiscing on lost love.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like what you saw..thank you for that visual, John,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Your lines spoke to me of contrast Jacob. I saw and felt much of it here. Shades of light and dark.

Like a shattered window
that needs compensation for its pane, I really enjoyed that and the play on pane.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...appreciate your visit.
j.