invading bloom

 invading bloom

 

 

 

brazen flower

ignores the frost,

like some who accost

regardless of wind chilled smiles

that sour.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/30/19

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... pansies are famous for surviving under leaves of kindness... that would be me.
Blankets of warmth against the chill make us feel comfy and loved, and a teakettle whistling is tempting to share when cold winds blow and endeavor to freeze our toes. Much is to be said about sunshine and a sip of wine. I love a rhyme in time. truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Pat,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

You are warmly welcome Jacob...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A rhyme slipped in there somewhere!

Short and stark with a defiant feel and powerful in its painted image. There were snowdrops in our garden during our worst weather and a few other bedding plants resisting the depth of the chill.

An allegory for someone who endures and still feels they are in there fighting?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words...actually slipped in two rhymes...mmm....out of character i guess.
appreciate your read and response, John.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Good to be out of character at times 'Teach', is it not?

[Jimmy Yetts]

You have words with a way.
Powerfully stated!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jimmy,
j.