for the love of mind

inspired by Dr. YumnaKay's recent post...

for the love of mind

kiss me sinfully,

as i touch your tree of knowledge

gardens grow love ephemeral

and roses only petal briefly

so let us dance in naked moonlight

as long as the summer's breeze

cheers us with wafts of engagement

i will press the experience between pages

and a tactile reflection of us

will always be preserved

long after the apples have fallen

from the tree.

erin-cilberto

1/30/19

Reviews

[kitty]

Value the exciting experiences shared. Preserve them like sweetest rose petals pressed gently between the pages of life! memories to be recalled at random. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, kitty,
j.

[Mark Mendoza]

Feels like a nice day with the growing tree, thats forever breathing.
Thanks for sharing this. It feels free, natural.
Sounds of a song ,in praise of a beautiful mind.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Mark,
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

An ephemeral kind of love but still something we all like to dip ourselves into. And not too wrong either if we get eternal memories out of it, I suppose..
I too am inspired by this write of yours, Jacob. Lovely to read.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words,YumnaKay,
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Though typically clever, lovely and touching, as well.
December love that, apparently, still yearns for July heat.
A high quality post!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jimmy...
i appreciate your support of my writing.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Life is indeed short and time precious, thus we must dance and take advantage of it before it is simply a memory. And we need memories to treasure to store for those winter years. As always an allegory full of the best descriptive fillings for us to devour Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, John,
was really inspired by Yumnakay's "Tale" poem.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I must take a look at it, thank you Jacob.