she was and she was

she was and she was

 

 

 

elementary emotions

like first grade crushes

chaotic moments

composure flattened

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/30/18

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Brevity is more; I have thoughts of first love/first heartbreak - and - all from she who was/she who did. Great share my friend ... :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Phill.
j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Chris May think she is a Diva, understandably....but I hope I've been her...innocently believing, fevered whimsy, uncontrollable passion....inconsolable moments....I have no problem with that passion or love...it's what I wanna be when I grow up!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one, Crippled Queen...:)
I am finding the interpretations so interesting...

[Chris Shaw]

Hey, sounds like a bit of a Diva Jacob. Someone who has been spoiled and wants her own way. A good bit of brevity here and some flashes of brilliant imagery. I reckon we all know or have known a gal like that :))

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...
j.