the lot of poets

the lot of poets

 

 

 

respectful delinquents,

street-wise sympathetic sophisticates

 

university castoffs

unceremoniously expelled

from the intellectual community

because they have eloped without books

just figurative pages of love

 

and the interpreted geniuses

with stiff upper lips

and unimaginative ulterior motives

snooze on their hard desks

breathing into stale ink wells devoid of ecstasy 

 

the binding that binds them to blind reverence

as they aloofly expel the poets

as sinners

 

sterile facts for the chosen ones

metaphors for the fallen ones

the respectful delinquents

writing their wares upon pavement parchment

in chalky waves of diligence

 

how delighted they are to be kicked to the curb

of poetic insanity,

to find their own pools of periodic drowning

taking in muse filled swallows

that fly over gravestones of the forgotten bards

whose words still live

as

respectful delinquents

 

with the other street-wise sympathetic sophisticates

who dream in verse.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/30/18

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

it use to be, not too long ago, that all poets came from academia. That is, until Sexton proved that
even drunken life was a call to humanity. (Crane thought that being called a poet was the same as being effete). Poetry was not considered the mannerisms of the manly but the screeching musings of the effeminate. But the 1960's gave a different voice to art and although Ginsberg, Lowell and Sexton were transgender, their voices embodied the souls of confession which was the savior of poetry going forward. I love this poem because it speaks to the human code of poetry writing. Poets are everywhere and they are everything non-scientific.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really appreciate your words, here, dana.
thank you.

[Cory Barrett]

A lot of crazy truths are here. Like surviving a flood poets find our way to tread water or if possible to move forward through the on slot of emotion an clouded communication.

Really well written.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Cory,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... If our leaders had been more poetic and caring thirty or so years ago... we might not be in the difficult circumstances we now face. The border should have been enforced with a Wall years ago. Now we have heartbreak. God help us all... looking for Christmas Prayers. Amen 🙏 Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Pat.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes, we are.
"sterile facts for the chosen ones
metaphors for the fallen ones
the respectful delinquents
writing their wares upon pavement parchment
in chalky waves of diligence"
The above lines. I do like and they are true. The fallen ones make the pen dance. Thank you Jacob for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Coyote,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[Beccy]

Those who are not poets, will never really understand those who are.

Fabulous write, and in particular; 'respectful delinquents,' is just a perfect description. Oh, and I am as dismissive of the interpreted geniuses, as you clearly are.

Beccy.

PS. Haven't been around much lately jacob, my father has been unwell, but is better now; I have much to catch up on

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am so glad to hear your father is better...

thank you for your words, Beccy.
j.

[AYVID N]

To be anything, to feel something, to find their voice on paper, on parchment, on pavement, in verses or prose, is what the delinquent wants, seeking a moment of pure brilliance, of discovery, to delight his own soul.

Such brilliant words, Jacob! 💕

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, DIVYA,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! This speaks volumes. You are so talented for I see how you compare those aloof, righteous elites of Jesus' times and compare their outlook towards the talented and normal people as sinners of the word. Wow!
They think they are the only ones appointed by God if I may use that. How many great poets and writers were expelled, looked down on, redicueled and so forth in history, to find out their worth at later dates.
Hats off for you great poet...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are so kind and encouraging, thank you, Sami.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, jacob.

[Chris Shaw]

Prose people versus poets. Is that what they think, poets are castoffs expelled from the intellectual community? And sinners as well? Oh my, I ask myself whether I would want to move in their circles with attitudes like that. Great poetry Jacob. I've felt a bit like that in my time writing in rhyme, when free verse is the preferred style nowadays. Mind you I am spreading my wings a bit.You have some fabulous lines here.


Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, Chris.
j.

[Norman 223]

Poets struggle to convey fleeting thoughts. These can follow several directions and therefore a
challege to the readers if they wish to pursue new concepts of language. As you have sometimes intimated, your words ultimately belong to the readers and their interpretations.
N.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Norman,
j.

[Kent Rawski]

Summed up in gripping reality harsh world of their life not chosen I feel it encompasses so much content with emotion great write

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Kent.
j.