the all clear

the all clear

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

 

the all clear

 

blips in fantasy

radar love exits the wound

eroding regrets

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/11/18

© 2018 jacob erin-cilberto


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Oh NO! Where did I lose you J ?

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

:)
i doubt you ever will, Crippled Queen...
This is sweet! Not the band, I am talking about the song. Nice change in pace my friend!

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

yep..."I've never been there, they tell me it's nice"
Joe Walsh is my favorite guitar player .. read more
Jon Roggie

6 Years Ago

but I kinda like the music
Jon Roggie

6 Years Ago

Dancing Queen was like a Mulligan
I never realized the band was from a foreign country.

Regrets aren't easy to bypass. The mind revolves around the same problem and disrupts the normal peace of mind.

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

yes, it does, thank you, 34.
should have seen that coming
radar's on the blink again, I see...

I've been drivin' all night, my hand's wet on the wheel
There's a voice in my head that drives my heel
It's my baby callin', says I need you here
And it's a half past four and I'm shiftin' gear... da da da da da da...


Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

i think i lost my Golden Earring...have you seen it?
Neville

6 Years Ago

its gotta be around here somewhere jacob...and the b side was the song is over methinks.... I will k.. read more
Always loved that song, "radar love"....Dutch group sang it...but I digress! The first cut is the deepest...and when it bleeds, sometimes all the love is gone. Lots to read in these three lines. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

thank you, my friend..yes Golden Earring ---they had a good sound...
appreciate your words,read more
Certainly a clear cut that left a scar.
Nice one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

thank you, Dale.
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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