Time to switch back to analog, and leave digital behind.
A scratched lp might hold your true meaning,
while a fresh cd loses a bit in the rendering.
Our best words,
we don't notice,
while still searching for that perfect one
Part of the reason to continue the story.
Jon
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
i love even scratched vinyl so much better...thank you, Jon.
j.
I hope it is the sweetest dream you ever remembered....sitting at your typewriter, deep in thought ...having laid out your greatest works in abundant stacks ....her fingers gently combing through the back of your hair as she whispers something in your ear...dazzles you with a bright smile and passionate eyes.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
i wish for "greatest works"---
we keep hoping to someday write the poem that might make our p.. read morei wish for "greatest works"---
we keep hoping to someday write the poem that might make our poetic name...but who knows if it will ever happen...Plath said that a year before her death...wrote her mom and said she was writing the best poems of her life...the ones that would make her name.
These fine words make me feel sad, but not alone... Surely, the hallmarks of a good poem, nah.. a very good poem, cheers jacob... Hit ctrl alt delete, it always works for.....
".permanent sleep mode" ... :) maybe crashed due to malware but ... at least the mode may be restful once that decision is made :} ... seems so brain dead ...walking dead ...phones attached and eyes glued .. what we gonna do jacob!?
E.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
i don't know if there is anything we can do...it is what it is now...and i doubt we can ever go back.. read morei don't know if there is anything we can do...it is what it is now...and i doubt we can ever go back.
thank you, E.
j.
6 Years Ago
i think you are right sir ...maybe the techniques of Akido would work .. grab hold and help guide to.. read morei think you are right sir ...maybe the techniques of Akido would work .. grab hold and help guide to where the intention is .... ohhh that's crazy isn't it ;)))))))))) i started confiscating my kids phones at the door when we had gatherings ;)
Jacob, with the right algorithms programmed into the system we can prescribe the mood that suits you best so that your head and heart can take a vacation :)
that was a lousy review probably but for some reason it made me think of the hopelessness we face sometimes because as much as we think we are in control we are never fully. too many external factors.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
i love your review and the insights you always put forward...thank you, Ana.
j.
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..