grief's echo

grief's echo

 

 

in so many words

exhibitionism's call

to silent mourning

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/5/18

Reviews

[CD Campbell]

Profound short. You do it right. This should be a Jacobism taped to my fridge.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, CD..
j.

[Mark]

Sometimes that echo reverberates so quickly it never seems to leave. But usually, though not always, the time between echoes gradually increases so that it becomes more bearable. Until the next one. Very to the point, Jacob.

Mark

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insight, Mark.
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

well done ... deeply felt in just the title ... i have felt the grief that echos through the years ... you collapse in it ... the weeping unconstrained ... once spent ...that quiet calls us all ...maybe a healing over time ... :( i agree with Crowley ... pretty genius sir
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, E.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Grief's echo, never silent for long before it returns. Some grief never leaves you, although it may soften.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it does eventually soften...thank you, Chris.
j.

[emmajoy]

Depends on the hearing... and the healing, j. Such a few words but they touch.. and, will remind - remain.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, em.
j.

[emmajoy]

As said many times before, your words touch and more..

[Crowley]

As still as an echo can be...and that is saying a lot for exhibitionism's call. I really had to think this through, and I think it is a little bit of genius.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Crowley.
j.

[Paul Bell]

This is like the final curtain closing on the last act.
No words left to say.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Paul.
j.

[MomzillaNC]

Stark words in a time with little comfort. Well penned.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Momz....
j.

[MomzillaNC]

yvw :D

[Papaya]

grief's echo, the title alone is incredibly moving
I feel the echo, the silent cries in my chest that throb and throb so heavily in those moments of grieving

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Ana.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

That echo reverberates in the soul and never quiets. Beautifully emotional write. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Lydi.
j.