Committed

Committed

severed reasoning,

love's decapitated sense

i rue rubber rooms

erin-cilberto

9/15/18

Reviews

[steppenwolf]

Nine words can create such a sense of doom!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Leslie.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love can make us crazy. Very nice use of words my friend.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Coyote,
j.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Committed'
erin-cilberto,
Two people together sure can bring about a little confusion within the confines of love. This little bit of wisdom and honest portrayal just shows that the process of loving and living with a dear loved one can bring so much good along with times of crazy wanderings. "severed reasoning' I get that.
Blessings and a great poem
Kathy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, Kathy.
j.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Your welcome jacob. I enjoyed reviewing and reading this poem. Fun short one.

[andrew mitchell]

Now I know where the line "madly in love" comes from. Reminds me of Its a mad, mad world!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i remember that flick...yes...Thank you, andrew.

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

There is no sense when it comes to love...just pure emotion. Yes, it can lead to craziness. A lot of meaning packed into this short gem. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi...
I appreciate you.
j.

[Michael Oliver]

What the F****? - I love this one Jacob because What the F***?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha, thanks, Michael.
j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Muses that leave you crazed and desperate are sometimes the best kind of inspiration.lol They really push you to the edges. Always love these small kisses.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Queenie...:)))

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Brilliant wordplay in your title and sardonic senryu j. So true, we lose our heads to love-figuratively and , in your poem, quite literally. “They’re coming to take me away- ha, ha!”- taken to the extreme....love the wonderful madness and humor of your words my friend!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah yes, i remember that song well...Napolean Bonaparte the third..."to the funny farm where life is beautiful all the time"--
thank you for the reminder and the kind words..
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Love in which, at least, one lover has "lost his or her head" could well be viewed as a form of insanity.
Such lovers often find themselves "bouncing off the walls.
Dynamite senryu!

[Chris Shaw]

Much truth here Jacob, clever use of words and much to ponder, on the disintegration of relationships from their heady heights.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Chris.
j.