first loves and skipping classes

 

first loves and skipping classes

 

 

elementary as first grade

the simple smiles you bestowed

taught me love's golden rule

 

without complication

 

and i find myself searching you

in the recesses of my life.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/27/15

Reviews

[Bacchus]

Interesting duality of skipping class and the golden rule through, should we call, the visual arts?! Fun one here.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Bacchus.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Uncomplicated and innocent. How lovely is that when thinking about love? And then you grow up and it all becomes a minefield. No wonder we travel back in time. Nice work.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Chris.
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Your metaphors, clever and apt.
Charming, young Jake!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh yeah, Young Jake...ha ha.
thanks,Jimmy.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Simplicity lost in time- nothing will ever be the same as it was - feelings wanting to be felt emotions being sought out - returning to the start but only change remains - if only we could go back and find the simplicity and innocence of time gone by- wonderfully worded thoughts🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks for your kind words on this oldie...

j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Good old oldies- deserves kind words🌹