the river

the river

 

 

restless fingers tap

into tributaries of

intricate syntax

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/6/18

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Our thoughts flow like a river, breaking into tributaries, and breaking again into small streams. Just words.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful more than "just words"---j.

[mou]

restless yet experienced fingers..probably river is the best synonym of life..always I get stunned with your play with few confident words..but J, I'm missing that profile picture of yours..
mou.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks about the picture, mou...but i think the site is better off with the Vermont maple in fall and the 57 two tone olds...:)))
thank you for the kind review...
j.

[mou]

it's always my pleasure, J. :)

[Adam Adams]

the presence & the varieties of river be nicely picturized in "syntax" words. had me lost somewhere by the lake of peace for a moment while reading this piece. spellbinding!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Adams.
j.