the river

the river

 

 

restless fingers tap

into tributaries of

intricate syntax

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/6/18

Reviews

[KeeD]

I like this little Haiku, you used a seasonal subject and created exactly what your poem describes. Magical piece by a true poetic magician.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are very kind, Kee.

thank you,
j.

[Ranger Kessel]

Brevity make impact. Thanks.

LOL

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ranger.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You never miss, Jacob. Another gem, polished to shine!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelly.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... words ripple on the river singing about the storm the night before... carrying our dreams to another shore. Your poetry floats along the trail of feathers left by eagles flight. truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your reply is so poetic...better than the poem...
thank you, Pat, appreciate your kind words.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

You are welcome Jacob... we just experienced sudden winds and rain...
causing the Rappahannock River to rise where rocks on rapids had been a refuge for geese and other prey. Our River often speaks of historic times when George Washington was a boy and walked along the Rappahannock River in Fredericksburg, Virginia. May your days be pleasant and full of adventure. truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, that is a great story...that river is special, for sure.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A literary senryu. I certainly hope the tapping continues for a great long while.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Fabian,
j.

[lightsong]

at least they keep on tapping, it's worse if they couldn't tap, the confusion in our mind, in our thoughts need to be released, even if it ended in some complicated sentences we might not understand.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Light.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

In all relationships there is order- whether it’s words, expressions actions- the order is created within the flow-smooth slow definite - infinite- 🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Kelly.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words my friend. If we used more of our mind. We can see too much, I believe. Nice use of the river and thoughts. Thank you Jacob for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are a kind man, Coyote.
thank you...
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[Lydia Shutter]

Our thoughts are very much like rivers....and that intricate syntax is sometimes difficult to negotiate. Good one, Jacob. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi...
j.

[emmajoy]

A code of their own, speaking aloud? You work eyes and mind alike with this: read, think.. applaud

5:7:5

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, em.
j.

[emmajoy]

you're welcome, J