the right to die

the right to die

 

 

 

suicide by lips

feel the blade's penetration

to the hips

 

shaky knees collapse

like the fluttering heart

into repose

 

the victim knows

he did this to himself

by letting her close

 

and now he lies comatose

still reeling with the feeling

deep inside

 

but nobody notices

they think he is sleeping

as he lies there 

still reaping

 

the ignition

of the kiss

he is grateful

he did not miss

 

oh beautiful death.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/2/18

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I like the closure you gave this, Jacob - one could only hope to be laid to rest with such release!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelly.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

What we allow ourselves to die a little bit more inside a little bit more each time for- the deadly affect of lust or love? Is it really worth it in the end? Well written🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelly.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Always a pleasure- thankyou🌹