Confronting Feelings---a Senryu

Confronting Feelings---a senryu

 

 

as our lips ignite

the lovely imposition

dares us to explode

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/7/18

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

The sweetness of a kiss explodes from Apple Blossoms...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Pat.
j.

[lightsong]

"confronting " feelings! THAT says it all! it is as if You've spoken it all in these two words, then the poem was the painting scene of it... ah! such allure, such passion!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Light.
j.

[Chris]

a dare well worth the making ...and taking.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

That’s what feels like when u apply a plumping gloss...🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Sjoeee- I want exploding lips as well- which leads to greater explosions- lol- popping popcorn🌹great write🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the words and the smile, Kelly.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Always my pleasure🌹

[Stella Armour]

hot lips Jacob, nicely said :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha...thanks, Stella.
j.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Ahhh, a change of pace and mood for you j. Perfect form and sweet visual. Playfulness of words and metaphor. Lips become ‘two pilgrims’ meeting in “the lovely imposition”- Wonderful and memorable line. Superbly crafted.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Annette.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this Jacob as I do.
All your work

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Julie.
j.

[Paul Bell]

What I love about this, is.
It works backwards too.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Paul.
j.