Word Count

Word Count

elapsing synapse

the distance

elaborates

like a wordy essay

filler syllables ignite

into years of memory

a forgetful mind

remembers a touch

an embrace

the eyes of shelter

for a scared heart

when we kissed into midnight

the moon acknowledged with a half smile

as we ignored perception

became reflection

our world was made in an instant

and then lost a moment later

as unkind time

elapsing synapse

wrote us out of each other's life

before the title found its place

on our page.

erin-cilberto

4/3/18

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

‘Wrote us out of eachothers lives’- that’s something I ponder on for always- meant to be’s and not meant to be’s- what’s it all about Alfie??? Maybe a different time or place or was it themselves that weren’t right? Ready? Still searching not embracing??? Some things well never know I guess- love the way you worked with words here with such deep and true meaning🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Kelly....appreciate your insightful questions....and yes, where is Michael Caine when we need him?

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure Thankyou for wonderful words🌹

[Jimmy Yetts]

Romance that more deeply furrowed the brain than it impacted reality.
Amazing poetry!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Jimmy...
j.

[Ardra]

our world was made in an instant
and then lost a moment later


as unkind time
elapsing synapse
wrote us out of each other's life
before the title found its place
on our page.


Mmm :) leaves their mark isn't it... so that we recall and write on.... about it...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ria.
j.

[Stella Armour]

A fleeting romance , but still igniting a passion to be remembered by the sound of it ..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Stella.
j.