the cry of spring

the cry of spring

 

 

Sunday saturates

the soil with weeping tears

it's April again.

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/3/18

Reviews

[Veronica Parker]

It certainly is the cruelest month

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, especially this year so far.
thank you, Veronica.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful haiku and that certainly sums up the continuous rainfall we have experienced where I live in the month of April. I also appreciated the alliteration in this piece and the way it sounds when read out loud. Nice.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Christine.
j.

[lightsong]

I have to say WOW, THAT IS April! for some mystical reason it always carry to me, to many others too, a warming wistful feeling... like Your heart is full and pouring with warmth that You want to cry... You want to love, to give love but not certain to whom or to where... yes, that's April, I myself wrote and writing right now another April Poem!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Light.
j.

[Tiana]

as it preps for May flowers :) Cant wait for my gardenias to bloom :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Tiana.
j.

[Gee]

Prefer the crying to God's dandruff.
Warmer weather on the horizon, yeahhhhhhhhh, Fed up to my back teeth of trudging around freezing cold construction sites covered in mud.
Morning Jacob hope you are well.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i hope the weather turns for you, Gee...

i like the pic, you look like such a happy couple...

i like that "God's Dandruff" idea.

[Gee]

We have a great life and relationship....I'm a lucky man.
25 years wed this coming October. Give that lady a medal.

[h d e rushin]

Spring doesn't come like it use to. In fact, nothing really comes as it use to except the dark, flames or intransigence. It's snowing outside my window as i write this. Toldja/ dana

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and we are waiting for the april snow to hit carbondale later tonight.
ha ha...

[Neville]

True, so truly true, & how they weep so every year, and at this time precisely.....Excellent jacob & nothing short of it............Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Neville.

j.

[Neville]

It is often more than just a pleasure & this dinky one, was a good example...............

[andrew mitchell]

Just a cry of rain would help down here in this Indian summer weather! We have had no rain so far this year!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the read and words, andrew.
j.

[Stella Armour]

I love the title Jacob, crying indeed .. but spring needs to shed those tears to help the beautiful flowers grow.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it does, Stella...that is a good point...thank you for your words,
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

April is a month of fresh showers new beginnings and free spirits flowing- beautiful freedom and all wonderful signs that sing a graceful song to full the heart- love the way you talk about April - wonderful 🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Kelly.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Amytime🌹🦋🌈🌻🌷