close to the rhythm

close to the rhythm

 

 

impertinent touch

lovely hands massage heart's incentive

it's a fine line between unwanted interruptions

and delightful delays

 

we just need a reason to procrastinate our song

 

so the lyrics can gather momentum by sunset

and pens gather sounds 

like soft flowers

that don't care about time.

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/22/18

Reviews

[Neville]

Tis a fine line indeed jacob but you pitched it perfectly my friend......Another good un, for sure...Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Neville.
j.

[Neville]

Always a pleasure jacob......

[Stella Armour]

waiting for just the right moment and delighting in the delays can be so sensual, and then in the moment time really does not matter..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is so true...thank you for your words, Stella,
j.

[AYVID N]

Good things come to those who wait and the best comes last...Appreciated very much...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, DIVYA.
j.

[AYVID N]

It is my pleasure always sir.