KIss

 

Kiss

 

leaning against the stone wall stoned on you

dizzy me curled into your caress

your scent like a soft arm within my sleeve

 

your hair brushing lightly against my bewildered lips

as i embrace the profusion of beloved confusion

trying to keep my balance.

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/17/1o

Reviews

[Neville]

Hey jacob, some of us out here have been there too, but it takes something like these exquisite words of yours to serve as the catalyst which enables us to claw them back. Very much appreciated.......Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Neville...
j.

[Ardra]

Such sweet comfort and joy....in simple small things ... :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, there is. thank you, Galadriel.
j.

[AYVID N]

He is overwhelmed. I sense the profusion of joy and bewilderment in your words.

"your scent like a soft arm within my sleeve" - I can sense it and feel it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, DIVYA, for your words.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Oh wonderful I felt myself being supported without any strength giving in and becoming light jelly under the power and gentleness if that hypnotising kiss that takes you to another place and time where all time stops and two become one in the depths of tranquil tenderness of touch and nothing else matters- loved readung🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, and sharing how you related,
j.

[θεά]

This has such a relatable realness to it. The emotion and moment- all captured in a raw, vulnerable moment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Mallika.
j.