KIss

 

Kiss

 

leaning against the stone wall stoned on you

dizzy me curled into your caress

your scent like a soft arm within my sleeve

 

your hair brushing lightly against my bewildered lips

as i embrace the profusion of beloved confusion

trying to keep my balance.

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/17/1o

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is one of my favorites of yours that I've read so far! I love the affection nearly dripping off the page. I love the sensations of being off-balance, as it really can be, when dallying up to the cusp of a kiss. I love the way you play with word sounds: "stone wall stoned on you" . . . "profusion of beloved confusion" . . . and the last line is perfectly crafted! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

she made me feel this way...thank you for your kind words, Margie.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... gentle persuasion is a gentle kiss.... a touch of
enchantment... truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Pat.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

"the profusion of beloved confusion"
I love that Jacob. You blow us away with your fresh, original and deep insights. Wonderfully said...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Sami.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[lightsong]

tempting You in a charming alluring way... where You know there is no escape, weaken You in a wondrous way, playing over Your gentle heartstrings and senses, still... burning You deep with desire, what a moment of strong passion You've created here.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Light...
j.

[Stella Armour]

Drunk with love and dizzy too... what a lovely ecstatic state to be in :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you , Stella...
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

what a moment in time and my own memories ..that moment of bliss that demands a man's self control as the ticket ... men fall for "her" harder than we are given credit for ...
https://youtu.be/7lp7FtJXp7k
i really like this one jacob...your protagonist wins for once ;) at least for a moment :)))))
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, E.
j.

[kitty]

Tender and so romantic. Takes us 'oldies' back a few years with nostalgia. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kitty...
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

What's to say?--elegantly portrayed.
And still manages to come off as thoroughly human.
An endearing offering!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you , Jimmy...
j.

[Paul Bell]

Sometimes that exact spot, is that exact spot.
As long as it fits two people, it will do just fine.
From all accounts, it did.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Paul...:)))

[Lydia Shutter]

The picture you paint here is stunning! Two lovers in an alleyway grabbing clandestine kisses. So passionate. Wonderful write. LydI**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Lydi.
j.