Today

Today

 

 

and in the last year

digesting the missing you

your sun placates me

 

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/3/18

Reviews

[Gee]

One year passed already Jacob.
Hope you are well

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Gee...doing fine.

busy with teaching.

[Einstein Noodle]

the contrast is vivid ... amplifies both the loss and the being healed .. pretty cool senryu jacob...comes across as well thought out ... and i like the language you chose ..
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, E.
j.

[Bacchus]

What warmth can bring.
It's been a long year.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it has...but a pretty good one...despite feeling the loss, but then, that is life and it is death.

[Jon Roggie]

This makes me think of the oncoming spring.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jon....yes, and a bit of sadness this time around.
j.

[Jon Roggie]

May your memories burn bright, and your sadness fly away.

[Coyote Poetry]

I wish I could make the words talk like you do. In 12 words. The strong statements made the reader think. Thank you Jacob for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Coyote..
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure my friend and you are welcome Jacob.