Today

Today

 

 

and in the last year

digesting the missing you

your sun placates me

 

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/3/18

Reviews

[Kelli April]

Time heals all wounds, but not without a scar to remind us. Short, yet still thought-provoking. Very intriguing!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelli.
j.

[User]

Short but sweet. You’ve managed to squeeze so much impact into so few lines. I would love to learn to do this as affective lay as you’ve done here. Thanks for sharing this Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Dotty.
j.

[mou]

when I try to hate, remember 'it' for once (only for the purpose of awakening the anger) and finally get that it was not 'just once' but 'million'..oh I just hate this game..but I love your poem too much..though I like your every words but it has some different reason ..thanks for sharing this wonderful write
mou.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, mou.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

This is so powerful...three short lines. We miss our loved ones more in the year of firsts than we do after time passes, but the wonderful memories....the sun....keep us going. Beautifully emotional. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Lydi.
j.

[Alessander]

Short but impactful.
Good traditional haiku linking back to nature and longing

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Alessander...i find haiku and senryu the only form poetry i like to write...
mostly i am free verse...so i appreciate your kind words.
j.

[Hebe]

This was very moving ...thank you for sharing such deep and meaningful moments .. spring is in the air:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Hebe...you are kind.

j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

A year, already. Where does the time go when it feels like only yesterday you were saying goodbye? As with all your writings, I hang upon your every word, Jacob. Such a touching, moving piece. Thank you for sharing this one!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelly...the last two poems were really about two people...a friend i lost many years ago was 27 when she died...she would have been 61 today...

appreciate your kind words.
j.

[Neville]

There is a certain sadness, but also beauty here
anniversaries are such telling times, I fear....

Go well jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Neville...
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Distance makes heart grow fonder- silence separates not distance- well written🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelly...
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure🌹

[Jimmy Yetts]

Clever and lovely senryu.
An insightful creation!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Jimmy.
j.