an inkling

an inkling

 

 

write me a perpetual letter

don't sign it,

 

ever

 

 

just keep the cursive lines straight,

no lies,

just the truth of love

 

let me catch the scent of you on the pages

i will fold them neatly

as i fold your feelings

within my heart

 

i will read you forever

if you write me a perpetual letter

don't sign it,

 

don't give me conclusion

 

ever.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/24/18

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

It's such a sweet poem and so expressive.... I absolutely love it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, DarkMist.
j.

[Elizabeth]

You're welcome :)

[Stella Armour]

Oh yes, leave the door open always with a welcoming sign above it ..... home is where the heart is.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Stella.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... Life and love... can be perpetual... one day flows into the next with beauty blessed... savoring the seasons of love.
truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Pat.

j.

[θεά]

There is something indescribably beautiful about things that are left incomplete. About people you've met only once or more but haven't had the chance of establishing a longer relationship with. About stories with open endings. I think it remains beautiful because of the infinite possibilities it leaves us with. About love, life and death. Thanks for a very thought provoking poem Jacob. As always a great write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your very kind review, Mallika...
j.

[θεά ]

A pleasure.

[Jon Roggie]

Nice. Let me see if I can keep the conversation flowing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you Jon....i am sure you can.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

another little gem jacob and yes how a signing could spell the end, keep the dream open. So enjoyable to read!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

I had an inkling I would like it!

[Donna]

I really liked reading that. Everyone is so busy texting, messenger, emails etc. I love handwritten notes or letters and I enjoy writing them. I can read it over and over anytime I want. Its so much more personal!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Donna.

j.

[Donna]

I am new here and I haven't been writing for to long. I thought this would be a good place to read others poems and hopefully I can learn from others.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I have found much inspiration from the other poets on this site---it is home...welcome to WC, i hope you thrive here...
j.

[Donna]

That's good to hear. Thank you for the welcome!

[Cadel]

Theres something personal about reading the handwriting of someone else, after enough handwritten letters, it begins acting in the same way as body language does in face to face communication.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love your insights, thank you, Cadel.
j.

[Cherrie]

yes, nothing better than a letter. Todays communication is only as good as your phone plan. nothing better than a love note you can tuck away in your heart.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like your reply better than the poem...such a poetic response..thank you, Cherrie.
j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

i can draw several conclusions from this poem, no conclusions, no conclusions, no conclusions, amen.

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Al.

j.