a plagiarist's dream

a plagiarist's dream

blushing resources,
citations in red cheek
you splintered my boardwalk parchment
your eyes passed and granted access

i saw something within
as i gazed with improper agenda

the paper wrote itself

and your love was the only

work cited entry needed.

erin-cilberto

2/23/18

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem.
"your eyes passed and granted access"
The simple lines mean everything. Simple glance. Maybe a possibility. Thank you Jacob for sharing the amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for reading and for your kind words, my friend.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Jacob.

[Einstein Noodle]

damn jacob...you break my heart all the time with this stuff :( the plagiarist ...such a cold lover-in-thief ;)
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, E.

j.

[lightsong]

Brilliant metaphor, Your imagination always something very interesting, always print images where one is forced to think of Your mind, and how it works wonderfully, adventuring in places few can reach, it has his own unique working, and I like it....

as a poet, Your poem even speaks more, one can picture them selves reading something where they feel there is something wrong, and yes, the "un-originality", the fake, the stealing that it there, behind the mask of beautiful words... and, as a poet, what is more effectively touching to his senses but to compare the fake "beloved" her fake feelings and emotions, into a "fake" poem?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Light.
j.

[Gandré]

The plagiarists, they have been around for eternity.
I liked "you splintered my boardwalk parchment".

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Gandre

j.

[AYVID N]

Enjoyed this read very much. Just awesome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, DIVYA...
j.