colors of calm

colors of calm

 

 

a stifling wind

eases

you breeze into my life

wafting gently toward my heart

 

clouds part

as we come together,

i love the sky blue of you

halcyon is not dipped in sadness

 

necessarily,

and rain doesn't need to be unpleasant

if we share the umbrella of destiny

facing any causal climate 

 

with serene stillness.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/18/17

Reviews

[lightsong]

deeply deeply beautiful... deeply sensitive, deeply profound, Your style is trully special and unique, I don't know any one who can deliver wise message with the simple most gentle and clear way You do, it feels like a breeze wafting over our senses, You reach into places inside the human being with an effective tender touch, Thank You*

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind words, Light.
j.

[skeletongirl]

exquist choice of words, the flow is stunning. Wonderful wonderful job.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, skeleton girl.
j.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

“Halcyon”, the kingfisher that calms the seas, as your “sky blue” words calm the weather of the heart. Idyllic, rich with masterful metaphor, iconic write...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Annette.
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Especially loved the second stanza and your title drew me in. Such a serene write, though with a touch of melancholy. I always enjoy reading your poetry, Jacob. (:

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Yumna..
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Jacob.

[Einstein Noodle]

ohh hallelujah brother! so happy for this dreamy loves' poem ... i love it sir... very refreshing in your vast collection of shattering relationships and misery memories ;) ahhhhhhhhhhh now i bask in the bliss of your closing line :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, E.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful use of words my friend. You create visions and thoughts with your thoughts. Thank you Jacob for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Coyote.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Jimmy Yetts]

The only hint of sadness here is "necessarily."
Cannot deny this special woman's peace-bringing influence on the poet.
A glowing tribute to an amazing person, deep feelings and quality poetry.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Jimmy.
j.

[Ardra]

and rain doesn't need to be unpleasant
if we share the umbrella of destiny

mmm that's some beautiful lines :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you Galadriel...
j.