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the Newest package from Satellite Serenity

 

 

erosion,

disintegrating heart

rusted emotions

paint a black and white picture

i repel color,

 

don't want to see what is

just what i believe

dream

is still there

 

the tears probably did happen

corrosive drops 

clouds of confusion year in and year out

 

all the she's 

who left

so many lefts 

cannot be right

 

but life brings storms

and we try to rebuild the ruins

 

after so many reconstructions

we get out of focus

HD feelings confound the truth

 

regardless of the denial

when the circuits are damaged enough inside

 

we'll see the same image

no matter how many times

we change the channel.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/16/17

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

many strong lines that capture attention ..all true sir ...unless me own opinion is gone and done reconstructed again ;) i like this .. i like the kind of emotional maturity it lends to complex issues in our lives today .. lots to like in this jacob..thanks for sharing
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, E.
j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

comic under toe, reality vs illusion as the story goes until finally we understand our stupid prose.

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words and the smile, my friend.

j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

So many channels; so little new to experience.
How often we end up watching an old movie we've seen before--comforted by a god-like knowledge granting us the ability to finally know what's really going on. Unlike being in love, which ultimately bewilders.
Powerful poem!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love your insightful mind, Jimmy.

thank you.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes and how these images get distorted and magnified. great little gem Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, andrew.
j.

[Relic]

Those last three lines have so much truth in them. In my case, its the opportunity I blew and she wound up with someone else. The images of what could have been are the channel I can't change.

Great poem Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, sorry you could relate so well...sometimes love is just not kind.
j.