Form vs Content

Form vs. Content

composed kisses

lips exposed to irony

passion reserved

the scent of you ignored

standing tall against reeling backwards

removal of heart

but vivid recall

of another,

chaotic impressions

stream of consciousness in silent tongues

improvisation of hands

fingers touching keys

caressing the skin of letters

we are poetry in motionless sync

i am inside your stanza

and we are hyphenated syllables

revised too many times

to suit

the ties too stiff to flow

i want to surmise the other poem

the old one

was worth writing

even if the theme is 

outdated---

and i will never write like that again. 

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

I here music...
" I don't think that I can take it
'Cause it took so long to bake it
And I'll never have that recipe again "...........

Sometimes we blend..sometimes we separate ..
We may even settle for Good Old Memories...

I hear you..................

Jazzy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for listening, Jazzy...
j.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Thanks for the gift of GREAT Poetry !!!...and...You are welcome.............

[Ardra]

i am inside your stanza
and we are hyphenated syllables
revised too many times
to suit
the ties too stiff to flow

wow.. you just write and leave us amazed...
:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Galadriel...
j.