meanings and moments
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
meanings and moments
i'm your thesaurus; if you'll be my synonym,
we'll find the right words---
erin-cilberto
9/27/17
© 2017 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
nice little poem that has made me smile
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
thank you, Cassie.
j.
wrapped in this paper...the perfect sandwich!
Posted 7 Years Ago
wrapped in this paper...the perfect sandwich!
7 Years Ago
thank you Queenie.
j.
7 Years Ago
I always wonder....I am no teacher or psychologist....but why is it a little j? i feel like you thin.. read more I always wonder....I am no teacher or psychologist....but why is it a little j? i feel like you think your emotions, your words, your talent...small...insignificant. Your not...your bold, large like a mountain, vast like the sky, and you wrap long, compassionate, talented, emotions around us all! Im grateful everyday I get to read your words. just saying...these things wander around in here...i'll be quiet now :)
That's a lovely metaphor. It's all about how well they suit each other, I suppose... Nicely expressed, Jacob (as always) (:
Posted 7 Years Ago
That's a lovely metaphor. It's all about how well they suit each other, I suppose... Nicely expressed, Jacob (as always) (:
7 Years Ago
thank you, Yumna..appreciate your words.
j.
7 Years Ago
You're welcome, Jacob.
Very nicely done, great read!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Very nicely done, great read!
7 Years Ago
thank you, my friend.
j.
Your way with words has never ceased to amaze me, even after all this time. Thoughtful senryu.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Your way with words has never ceased to amaze me, even after all this time. Thoughtful senryu.
7 Years Ago
thank you for your kind words, Stonz.
j.
Very nice,short but much meaning.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Very nice,short but much meaning.
7 Years Ago
thank you for your words, Summer.
j.
Quite a line--few lines, actually.
Excellent, J!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Quite a line--few lines, actually.
Excellent, J!
7 Years Ago
thank you, Frank.
j.
Delightful! If two people can understand each other's words, they are destined to work out. Lydi**
Posted 7 Years Ago
Delightful! If two people can understand each other's words, they are destined to work out. Lydi**
7 Years Ago
thank you , lydi.....
j.
Finding the right words is an unending task for a poet. I enjoyed the read.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Finding the right words is an unending task for a poet. I enjoyed the read.
7 Years Ago
thank you , Fabian.
j.
Delightful, perfect Senryu. Lovely idea! Love this j.!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Delightful, perfect Senryu. Lovely idea! Love this j.!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
thank you for your words Annette.
j.
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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