terms of endearment

terms of endearment

 

 

impaired agenda

lips' interference

protracted time entwined

 

signing affidavits of good intention

but retention difficult

in your embrace

 

passion's lawsuit ensues

but being a happily framed victim

i would do years for you 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/24/17

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

We want to give it and do it all for love, but in order to do so, the object of our affection has to want us to do that. Good intentions mean nothing if the emotions are not there from both sides. Great metaphor. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Lydi...
j.

[The Seeker of Thoughts]

Love is boundless and makes us do some pretty stupid things. Oh well it's all alright if we get the girl.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks for your read and comment.

j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Jacob sometimes your poems are too deep for my mind to grasp but that's my problem not yours lol
I love your work, even though I don't understand some of them. You are so talented, I feel I shouldn't even be on this site compared to you and others I love this as all your work you and a few othrs are my inspiration to go on

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Julie, thank you for your complimentary review, but you deserve to be here as much as any other poet...we are not better voices than another, just different....all the voices matter.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Oh ok thanks

[AYVID N]

Affidavits regardless, we don't mind getting sued and sentenced in love...no, we'd keenly pay the price for just one touch, one look. A great poem from you Mr. Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as Doris Troy sang..."just one look, that's all it took"--
thank you,
DIVYA...

j.

[AYVID N]

Its such a pleasure!

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha i lvoe the ending ...such a pity that love and marriage can be such a legalese entanglement ..but a happy jailbird makes for a contented prison eh!? great stuff sir!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, and the piece of paper isn't the be all and end all...but if love is strong enough, who needs the paper...thank you, E.

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

:)...............

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sounds like a one way amicable divorce and that only leaves the conciliatory party vulnerable. Another thinker here Jacob as one struggles with the concepts you interweave in this one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just a plain old love poem...metaphorically speaking....thank you, John.
j.