floods of sadness

floods of sadness

 

 

 

the ravaging ends

but the scars insinuate

memory will be awash

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/17/17

Reviews

[Stonz P.]

Indeed, the memory will be awash.

Another good senryu.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, my friend...
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Sometimes those scars hurt more as time goes by. Three small lines packing a punch, Jacob. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kindness, Lydi.
j.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Some memories weather it's
losing a loved one or going
through a nightmare of abuse
It takes time to heal I've learned
from the abuse I endured
it's taking it's long time
to heal, time heals it can
be a difficult thing when
the heart is shattered.

Thank you for sharing
this lovely piece it put
me to tears.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for sharing, Benita...
j.

[Relic]

I don't know that anyone can recover from a loss of that kind of depth. The scars will last a lifetime.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Tim...

j.

[Michael X]

So little, speaks so much, I admire the way you craft messages, as only a poet can! To me, this speaks of the past and the future, the scars of the past but the optimistic approach of the future!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Michael.
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

It is said 'scars are tattoos with better stories'. But, not all scars are visible. Like the thought here. Good one, j.
Ted

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Ted...appreciate your words.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sometimes we overcome hurt and/or sadness but at others it is so profound that it embeds itself in our DNA. You take senryu to another level Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are kind John...thank you.

[AYVID N]

So profoundly true and beautifully written
...Yet sometimes there is the fairy of bitterness too and she'll ensure the memories are discounted and tossed into a common bin in a dim alley not oft visited.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, DIVYA...
j.

[AYVID N]

You inspire with your words Mr. Jacob. The pleasure is therefore mine.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Extremely clever; deeply perceptive.
Such gigantic disasters require extended--almost never fully anticipated--recoveries.
A concise and lyrical message.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Jimmy.
j.