liquid binding

liquid binding

 

 

shell casings of love

evidence of past wounding 

the blood never dries

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/17/17

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The splinters remain embedded after the bullets have disintegrated and left only the casings behind and we bear those scars always. Even if buried at times. Great senryu Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, John---
j.

[AYVID N]

The blood never dries...
So profound and true....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you my friend...
j.

[AYVID N]

You are so welcome!

[ReedWrite]

Ooooooooooo...what a great poem. So simple...and yet it hits hard, doesn't it? Shell casings of love...that is such a great line...evidence of past wounding. Wow. Awesome! Love it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Reed....
j.

[Relic]

Some people (women) have that kind of effect on us. Years go by like days.

Great comparison Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Tim....

j.