capitulating against the mouth of the wind

capitulating against the mouth of the wind

 

 

category five

his dialogue is no jive

unfortunately

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/27/17

Reviews

[emmajoy]

As ever intelligently formed prose poetry.. and tragic as it stand: the weather is cruel and crippling in Texas and there abouts. As to reading between the lines.. would I dare say anything undiplomatic!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, my friend.....
j.

[Zugzwang]

This is a great one. Is it about Trump, the hurricane, or both?
Who cares, it was a fun read.
Nice Senryu/Haiku!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Z.

j.

[Bacchus]

Very clever.
His dialogue...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Bacchus....
j.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

We pray for all the people in the states affected by Hurricane Harvey..we pray for all the people in the states affected by "the D" ( D for Disaster).
Both "category fives" but which "trumps" which in degree of devastation??? Great senryu!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Annette,

j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha Trump caught in the gust. So sincerely and well penned Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John......

j.