when x and y have passed

when x and y have passed

 

 

 

lone variable

no longer equation of

relativity

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/1/17

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Hypothesis zero...all bottomed out...unknown factor.. nothing relates. Clever, concise, perfect.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Annette,
j.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

In a way, this portrays the separation of bonds. Reading this I remember a statement, "we are relatives, yet when we meet we act like strangers." I don't know whether it has a connection but I'm really impressed and inspired by this logical poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i appreciate your words, Tazeen.
j.

[Priyanshi]

True, the words are...I agree with it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Priyanshi.
j.

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure, sir.

[Tony Jordan]

irrelevance as a formula - genius Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Tony.
j.

[AYVID N]

So brilliant...A null space! Meaningless in itself...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, DIVYA

j.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Mathematician or not you have captured the essence of loneliness for me in this Jacob. You are becoming king of senryu!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, John.
j.

[James]

Funny, I gave an impromptu math tutoring session today (I'm not a math teacher)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for sharing, James.
j.

[KWP]

oh thats so clever - lucky we are not all mathematicians :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i certainly am not....thank you, my friend
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

But deep yes very deep
Love it
Z is waiting
The end or just the beginning

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like your poetic and insightful reply, Julie.
thank you.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Welcome
Welcome Jacob

[Saumya]

This is deep :)
I like the theme that comes out of this piece.."When all those precious people, who made life worth living, depart..there remains certainly nothing, and then w are just a lone variable, 'alone forever'.

Thank-you for sharing this beautiful piece, Jacob:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love your reply...thank you for your insights, Saumya

j.

[Saumya]

You're most welcome😊