instinct

instinct

 

 

i flew a heart's coop

blustery wings endeavored

find their way to you

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/1/17

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Lovely Senryu j. Sounds like a trapped bird flew out of it's cage to find true love and a real home. Hope it lived happily ever after!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insights, Annette.
j.

[eeyore250]

Very romantic. I take it as your heart finding that one true love out there in the world.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, eeyore.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

For me you captured the effort expended in this romantic and failed enterprise. Another expressive senryu Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John.

j.

[KWP]

a gamble, hope it paid off X

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, KWP...
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this one
Through wind and rain they find each other

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Julie.
j.