Always think, if you could choose that journey again.
What would you change. The ultimate meeting of two people at just the right time. The ending where pain bites you on a lonely night. What would it be.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
probably time to find a different garden....we are enticed by beauty...thank you for your words, Pau.. read moreprobably time to find a different garden....we are enticed by beauty...thank you for your words, Paul...
j.
I was just outside pruning a rose bush and was pierced by one of its thorns. Love has a way of piercing the heart, its thorn forever haunting, despite new flowers breaking ground. There is always the promise but the pulse of lingering pain.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
thank you for sharing, Linda....appreciate your words,
j.
Ah, young love....we are so naive, but it feels so good. She lured you into her bed and then vanished....looking for fresh meat. An age old tale, but your metaphors make it fresh and enjoyable to read. Lydi**
The lake and dead man's float brought about imagery of King Arthur sent out in a boat to his final resting point from the movie. Excalibur. Having said that, an excellent portrayal of new lovers night rhapsody!
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..