movement

movement

 

 

an old pond ripples

the glass mirror conjugates

gentle verbs feeling

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/26/17

Reviews

[WoodenChair]

DETERMINATION OF THE WATER ABSORPTION COEFFICIENT OF CONSTRUCTION MATERIALS

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting response, WoodenChair,
thanks for the read and comment...
j.

[WoodenChair]

DIN 52617 -

[Ken Simm.]

Nice connections Jacob. Your thoughts follow beautifully.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ken...
j.

[ms. barrie]

i'm in awe of the beauty your ink captured in this. conjuring images (for me at least);
words dancing a ballet, rearranging themselves into their proper positions...
that is a testimony of your gifted pen. always a joy to re visit your art. ~ x - b.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, barrie.
j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

I have met your ripple and continue to look for more.

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for meeting that ripple, Al

j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Haiku-ish senryu.
Subconsciously, I understand this piece, completely, and eagerly accept its quiet loveliness. Unfortunately, my subconscious is typically inarticulate, so I'm unable to tell you why.
Just gonna have to take my word for it, prof.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay, i will take your word...and appreciate it.
thank you, Jimmy.

j.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

contemplative common sense in three lines ... And beautifully done as well ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Marv.
j.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Soothing, peaceful, gentle. Love it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Annette.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This feels a contrast to much of your recent works Jacob. It reflects a gentler more peaceful sentiment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John...
j.

[barleygirl]

I not only love this one, but I feel like I am the old pond! *wink! wink!* I love the correlation between "smooth glass mirror" and "rippled pond surface" -- the way it prompts ideas & comparisons to flow in the reader's mind (((HUGS)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words And relating...

j.