she knew
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
she knew
strands of motherhood the follicles of insight
deepest empathy
erin-cilberto
5/14/17
© 2017 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
a happy mother's day tribute jacob, lovely work.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
thank you, andrew.
j.
I love your simple but endearing sentiments here. I like the parallel ideas of strands-follicles-deepness, suggesting that a mother's knowing is penetrating like roots.
Posted 7 Years Ago
I love your simple but endearing sentiments here. I like the parallel ideas of strands-follicles-deepness, suggesting that a mother's knowing is penetrating like roots.
7 Years Ago
thank you for your kind words, barleygirl...
j.
So many images flood to mind with this piece. All of them loving and warm. "Strands of motherhood" is so interesting.
Posted 7 Years Ago
So many images flood to mind with this piece. All of them loving and warm. "Strands of motherhood" is so interesting.
7 Years Ago
thank you, Ty.
j.
You describe the very being of a mother in this Jacob. So aptly and sweetly said.
Posted 7 Years Ago
You describe the very being of a mother in this Jacob. So aptly and sweetly said.
7 Years Ago
thank you, John.
j.
"Follicles of insight"-brilliant line and brilliant Haiku. Mothers just know....!
Posted 7 Years Ago
"Follicles of insight"-brilliant line and brilliant Haiku. Mothers just know....!
7 Years Ago
thank you, Annette,
j.
She always knows, and that is both the joy and the heartache.
Posted 7 Years Ago
She always knows, and that is both the joy and the heartache.
7 Years Ago
thank you, Anne,
j.
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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