parchment's union with poet

parchment's union with poet

 

 

blissful signature

your writing, my waiting skin

onion paper mate

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/6/17

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

I love this simple marriage! Great write!

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Al...

j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Onion paper. A interesting item. Thank you Jacob for sharing the amazing poetry. You always leave me with something to think about.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Coyote...
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[Im His Daughter]

I used to use onion paper long ago.. haven't seen it since elementary school... I used it for drawing pictures well tracing lol.. Great writing Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i used to use it in my old Royal Academy manual typewriter...:)))) those days are long gone.

thank you, Im His..
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Onion skin paper....how well I remember it. Somehow writing was different then. Typing is not the same. Great senryu. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, Penmanship: and that is? Cursive: and that is?

[Lydia Shutter]

Too many people have no clue!

[Gee]

"ONIONS" I holler, "ONIONS, IS THAT IT? "
Your reply " I'm afraid so Gee yes, onions, that shallot "

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha hahahaha....thank you for the smile.
j.

[Chris]

All the peelings on the floor,
What is a piece in that core?

Solid one Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...i like your poetic reply...
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah the pen Jacob! Onion skin paper, thin but durable like the 'old' poet. Another wonderfully pictorial senryu.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John.