splitting flags

 

 

splitting flags

 

 

 

two brothers sat chairs apart

states apart,

on the same porch where they conversed

just months ago

tying the knot between them tighter

 

the rope of blood connecting,

the frays unseen at the time,

voices concluding

kinship overrides politics

never to be severed

 

and yet,

consequences tear the flag in half

and a new banner waves

 

God Bless America

becomes two separate entities

the chairs face each other in battle

the porch swing flies like bayonets in the wind

 

and the awkward silence

is the breeze that moves the chimes in prayer

 

the empty chairs

a family now in brevity

as parents weep for two brothers

perhaps reunited in clouds of empathetic longing

 

on a sky's porch

that sees the souls

sitting in two chairs

conversing in a rain

of medal-ed memories.

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/15/17

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

This piece, that oozes sadness, could easily speak of any nation or people who should look up to find that those who love one another also disagree upon topics and issues most controversial ... One could easily interpret your words penned to speak of the war between the states ... Yet, another war, not so different from that one, seems to be simmering and looming upon the horizon ... Our nation has reached a cross road in its journey among nations who rose and fell, long before we ever thought of the words United States, as a painful example of the plight of all nations who stray from their founding principles in self-deceptive-champion-like LACK of recognition that every nation is every bit as mortal as the very people who comprise it, and the character of any nation is defined by its people and the principles they hold dear and sacred … Tragically, there are those who use our principles to divide us, conquer us, and lead us to war in the name of God, country, freedom, and (ironically) peace … For all the advances of so called modern man, he has yet to learn that war always leads to more war, as the only profit gained from war is only to be had by those in power over us who harness our minds as Sheeple-People for the slaughter of conquest in seeking to line their pockets with the blood stained monies, territories, power, and prestige that assure them the comforts they seek for themselves and their posterity after them, for the only good Shepherd is that one cunning enough to lead you, mentally spiritually, and emotionally, to the slaughter full of patriotic fervor and religious zeal as that fodder of fools who remain forever clueless that they are but pawns and tools in a grand scheme of events beyond their cognitive comprehension of any graspable reality … Our nation is being readied, on a daily media fed basis, for war within and war without … The question is, will we always be fools played for fools by those who do rule, and have masterfully mastered the stimuli-motivational centers of our hearts and minds via mental programming and preparatory conditioning? … Your beautifully written poem serves as a witness of warning that history does repeat itself … We should be asking ourselves why that is … I am a fan of the Human Race, asserting that there is but one race of man upon this Earth, regardless of nationality, culture, language, religion, or complexion … Freedom is but that sugar before a horse illusion used by those in power to maintain their power and positions as Shepherds over, we, the Sheeple-People … When we learn how to say NO, we will not slaughter one another for your gain, war will come to end … Until then? ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, i agree wholeheartedly with your words, Marvin..thank you for them...the insight is right on.read moreyes, i agree wholeheartedly with your words, Marvin..thank you for them...the insight is right on.
j.

[J. J. Nightingale]

GO TRUMP !!..LOL

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn's Dark Poetry & More]

J.J. Nightingale … Where would Trump go that someone else, in a different variety of wolf-in-sheep's-clothing, would not also go at the first opportunity of attaining a position of leadership and power? … Here is an instance of that which I was speaking in reference as I shared my thoughts in reviewing Jacob's poem … Moderate thinking is fast becoming extinct, as is any form of free and unbiased thinking … Democrats blame Republicans, touting that Republicans represent only the rich and not the common working man … Republicans blame Democrats, touting that Democrats seek to drown our nation in too much government that is designed to transform our nation into a Socialist State … There is truth to be found in both perspectives, and much deception, as well ... We are slyly being corralled into extremes of thinking at whatever end of the spectrum is found to attract our personal interests on political and moral issues, thus, we are polarized and pitted against one another, rather than against those who truly are to blame for the miserably detestable condition of our nation … The solution, I would suggest, is for each of us to learn to pick up a t**d by the clean end … Is such a feat possible? … Absurdly, no! … This shared, when dealing with matters of ascertaining which turds in a cesspool are cleaner or cleanest, there is only one answer to be arrived at: None of the above … Or should we say, below, as cesspools are below ground and breed their filth sight unseen, fed and empowered with that sustenance which we, ignorantly, have ingested and digested in providing them with the very power and positions of leadership they have so avidly sought and attained … Applying today's sales and marketing strategies, one could say that if manure became popularly valuable, poor folks would be born without arses, but, also, reality would reveal that such a popular commodity would be promoted as beneficial, with no side effects, and would be sold, by the various opportunists seeking the power of further wealth, in all types of assorted and attractive packaging to attract and lure potential buyers, each with claims that its contents are purer, more potent, and of higher quality than the competition … Sadly, at the end of any day, the contents of ALL the intelligently colorful packages shall, upon examination, always be proven to be the same: Dung … Our nation's future is being decided by those in power in high places, sight unseen, and those in the limelight (Party affiliation makes absolutely no difference) kowtow to the Powers Behind The Throne … My humble and personal assessment? … There is no difference between Trump or Hillary, or any other potential leader for that matter … How do you know when a good person has become a walking, talking, lying, piece of crap? … When they enter the arena of professional positions of influence, politics and public office … History attests to this reality … Our nation is headed, it seems, to war by those who are steering its direction and fate … Those at the helm do not, necessarily, reside in the Oval Office, or in Washington DC … Every agenda our nation has opted to support, and is currently working to incorporate into our daily lives and society, is an agenda adopted and promoted by the UN and those who secretly rule the UN from those lofty positions of power that seek to maintain that power for themselves and their posterity after them … WE? … We're just dumb Sheeple-People for the feeding, fleecing, and slaughter in, yet, another war to end all wars, to be fought, once again, in ignorant bliss of the fact that the root cause of war—is war itself … Thank you for your thoughts, dear lady ...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

There is a starkness and a feeling of futility in this piece Jacob. It leaves a cold feel with cold metaphors and made me think of the American Civil War.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, John.

j.