when paid in full

when paid in full


overdue you,
there will be fines to pay

a contrition of kisses tendered
embraces in tandem

the waiting,
love's hour, confined minutes
into anticipation's bank note

something borrowed,
the lien on my heart----

you are the balance.



erin-cilberto
4/6/17

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

lots of love overtones here j, the interest, the balance, the deliverance, the expected charge, the trial, the money back, the refund and all payments in love accepted. haha i liked this j, love has more layers than an onion and do we get to the core!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and those onions as they peel do bring the tears, don't they?
thanks, andrew.

[Cryingkate]

Wow The Poem the review and reply . Awesome !

[Gee]

And as they say in show biz circles, "that's shallot !!! "

[Surya]

Ohhhoo!!!....That's hidden love in there, Well summed lines...I enjoyed the delight here..:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Surya...
j.

[Cryingkate]

Perfectly Summed ...............

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Connie.
j.

[Paul]

A totally relatable and a home hit poem. Wonderfully written. I enjoyed this look into love. Thanks for sharing!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Paul...

appreciate your visit and words.
j.

[KWP]

ahhaaaaa ... this I like ... no fines to pay ... just love baby love ... forgiveness is for the strong ... make each moment count ... don't waste time in the past ... just embrace and love x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like your philosophy my friend..thank you for your response,
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

But are we ever paid in full? It seems to me we're forever wanting more maybe we keep it mortgaged that's why the interest keeps getting high...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insight Yumna...yes that may be why...

j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Jacob.

[Papaya]

The lien on my heart...
such a dangerous position to be in for the debt may never be payed and the heart lost forever.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, Ana.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

There is always that one person...the one who stole a piece of your heart. Is the balance ever really paid off? I wonder. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true...Lydi...the balance never seems to go down...too much interest to pay i guess.

read moreso true...Lydi...the balance never seems to go down...too much interest to pay i guess.

thank you,

j.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Ah and being overdue is such a struggle but there goes the stress and the anxiety when all comes into the clear. And as it grasps you in its arm, there is nothing else to pay towards as now you wish to owe once more.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Sir Draft...

j.

[Sami Khalil]

"there will be fines to pay

a contrition of kisses tendered"