glance

glance

 

 

philanthropist gaze

your seductive charity

overwhelms the pauper lover

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/3/17

Reviews

[Ruth]

A blending of differences always makes us question the value of self, this is so beautifully concise Jacob and holds such impact to the reader's heart, beautiful :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Poppy.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Great senyru....people from different avenues of life can be drawn together, but will it work? Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Lydi.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Inequality in relationships seems the norm Jacob. I used to feel 'blessed' if a woman took an interest in me. You capture such inequality in a senryu with impact.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, John.
j.

[Paper]

Okay. This one I get. Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks, Paper.
j.

[redzone]

teachers and poets just don't make enough to be wooing a philanthropist Jacob... the words may be just right, adjectives placed appropriately, but it still costs $2.50 for that iced coffee that she drinks... and $3 with the "gaze"... ;0) loved this one Jacob

redzone

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we make nickels and dimes...and get nickeled and dimed...:)
i appreciate your response, and the smile...

thank you, Curt.
j.

[redzone]

ever read that book "nickeled and dimed" by Barbara Ehrenreich??

[jacob erin-cilberto]

actually yes....all of us at Logan read it...and some did assignments on it. Several years back.

[redzone]

yeah not a new book, I read the book, it was a birthday gift from a friend and then had to pleasure of meeting her when she spoke at Revolution Books in NYC where I volunteer at...