departure

 departure

 

 

white peaks melting view

early spring's tinged breast of snow

melancholy leaves

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/20/17

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

This piece really inspires mental images that remind me of when I was a kid living in Albuquerque, New Mexico near the base of Sandia Crest ... The view was breath taking even for a kid ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i bet that WAS quite beautiful there...thank you for sharing, Marv.
j.

[Relic]

And a new start with spring. I've always thought of season's as metaphors for life.

Nice one.

[Kristina Moulaison]

Oh beautiful! Another great one! Love "melancholy leaves."

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kristina...
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Winter wanes and although the flowers of spring start to peek out, there are sad thoughts that will not melt like the snow. Poignant. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Lydi.
j.

[Paul Bell]

Strangely enough the sun was shining this morning.
And if my calculations are correct. My deckchair which blew away in November, should only be 4.2 miles away. Happy days.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

hope you find it, Paul...
thank you for the visit this morning...
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

great haiku! good timing ..clever word play ... brown melancholy leaves are strewn all about the forest floor as exuberant buds are greening .."melancholy leaves" indeed! great one says i!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, E.
j.

[Miss Sharon]

You've captured the ending of one season and the beginning of the next very well...and in so few words! Bravo. ~Sharon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Sharon...
j.

[writ rajat]

wHAT A poem is this very nice it meant alot to me

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, writ.
j.

[redzone]

I saw some daffodils on the way to the subway last week and then it snowed some over the weekend, hope they survived... but for that brief moment I was smiling and thinking it won't be long before it starts to get warmer... YEA!!!!

redzone

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Curt...
j.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

it's unusual to see snow loved missed of dreaded; nice words

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Cascara.

j.