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love is a return address

in the corner of a heart

running out of ink

erin-cilberto

12/4/16

Reviews

[Relic]

A short but sad perspective. Lots of emotion in this Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Tim.
j.

[redzone]

I got the return address down pat Jacob, it's who to send it to that gets confusing and what address to send to... sheeeesh, now I have all these returned letters, very little ink in the heart and that Elvis song tap dancing in my head... but, and it's a BIG BUT, I loved your poem...

redzone

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Curt...for the words and the smile...

j.

[Diamond]

This is simply amazing. This poem touched my heart deeply. As one of the other reviews says great wording too.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Queen,
j.

[Michael X]

Wow, that is heartbreaking. Speaks volumes. I like the choice wording!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Michael...
j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Your killing me, softly, slowly, but without restraint!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Queenie.

j.

[WittyWonka]

I've a ton of these in a shoe box. Love the metaphor and poetic form.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Witty...

j.

[...]

ahhhh the brevity returns...love it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, lynn.

j.

[barleygirl]

I hear you loud & clear *sigh!*

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, my friend.
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

One must, I assume, include the zipper code--or perhaps, in this case, withhold it. Not certain which way it goes.
Three amazing and powerful lines, Jacob; lines that definitely deliver the message

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Jimmy,
j.

[James]

This one pulled on my heart stings. I love the analogy, it's perfect. The heart only has so much ink to pour out, eventually it has to be refilled.

If they wait too long to respond all their letters will be marked return to sender.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, James.

j.