postmark

postmark

love is a return address

in the corner of a heart

running out of ink

erin-cilberto

12/4/16

Reviews

[Valentine]

Fantastic idea for a write Jacob. Almost like being stamped...return to sender. Valentine

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Kathie.
j.

[Leslie Philibert]

Pleased to have catched this one. Like it. It has all the charm of the Liverpool poets, or a touch of Hugo Williams. Excellent.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Leslie...

will have to look him up...

j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Too true, j. Love sends out a postcard but there is no reply.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, just like the Beatles sang..."No Reply"
thank you, Ted.

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

OH MY....how brilliant this is, Jacob! True love never really leaves the heart. No matter how nasty a break up might be, there is always that fading bit of love...does it ever really leave? I don't think so. Fantastic! Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, my friend!

j.

[ReedWrite]

Love this...so simple, and yet so profound.
love the last line...running out of ink...so true...nicely done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, ReedWrite...

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

your poem has started me singing "Return to Sendah" by the wonderful Elvis :) i will have it on the brain all day ..i just know it! thanks a lot jacob!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha...thanks, E.

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..............

[Paul Bell]

Gets my stamp of approval. I actually bought stamps the other day, first time in years. I could have flew to America cheaper.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, and the smile, Paul.
j.

[.]

There is nothing worse than a love marked 'Return to sender'!

As always, very well written and full of thought and reason. Nice work, Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Doodley.

j.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I know an old Tagalog song here entitled "Kahit Maputi na ang Buhok Ko" (Even When My Hair Turned White) that is an all-time favorite because of its great message of a lifetime love.
Isn't it touching when someone tells you that his/her heart won't function for anyone but for you until its last beat? That happens in true love

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very interesting, thank you, Dhaye.

j.

[Daydreamer]

.Such depth composed in a few lines.. gives me hope
that perhaps there's a replacement, like a fluidwriter pen overflowing and never ending..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Daydreamer.
j.