Interlude

Interlude

 

 

 

eloquent words ponder release

from the tightly lipped artisan

finding strength in the kiss of inspiration

 

the skin of verbose longing

stretches towards the touch of the pen

and the quilted structure of a form

 

lies upon the stanzas of wanting

in hushed whisper

the theme explodes in rare climax

 

a poem conceived

from a poet's love induced advances

as she shyly turns away,

 

feeling the momentum

of his creativity

and the best intentions behind it.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/11/16

Reviews

[Shannon]

I enjoy when someone can pull a metaphor or at least a subtle double entendre so far, completely taut. But it never behins to fray or unravel. You seem to have mastered this, as 'interlude' so clearly demonstrates.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, S. Mi...

j.

[Nessly]

We must embrace our creativity as though we are embracing a lover. Loving this idea! So beautiful!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Nessly...

j.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Pens romanced by flaming desire
Dancing bare for a writer
Take me, use me
I am yours
Till reality burst the bubbles
And ink turns old, and dry..

Wow... well done !!

Jazzy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your poetic words, Jazzy.

j.

[J. J. Nightingale]

YOU ARE WELCOME !!.....................

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... "the quilted structure of a form" ...
each piece representing a time of special events.
"Finding strength in the kiss of inspiration".
Beautiful lines of poetry. truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Pat.

j.

[h d e rushin]

because even the worst of love poems jacob are sincere. I wrote a poem about a friend who had just passed and gave it to his family.......of course they were dumbfounded. So I went on to explain what it meant (like we always do with those who don't read or write poetry). It is hard as hell to explain
intentions my friend. The language we write in, and are ultimately restricted by) just wont allow it.

It's like catching the eye of a pretty girl on the bus. She smiles, so you delight in her smiling...But that doesn't mean you want to meet her folks or take her 6 year old Great Pyrenees for a walk....

if you know what I mean.....Great poem sir..//dana

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i might rather want to take her Pyrenees for a walk than her...i'm shy that way..i could probably talk so easily to the dog...

:)))

but i certainly know what you are saying...intentions are hard to explain...so we just let the poems speak for us...and readers can interpret intentions however they will.
thank you, dana

j.