conception

conception


that vowel
is a chip off the old writers block
that consonant
in union with the other
a marriage of letters
leads to children of words
to a generation of lines
to a poem for all time...


erin-cilberto
10/21/16

Reviews

[Valentine]

You put this together so well, I really like it. Valentine

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Valentine.

j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Ah,yes. Our favourite children conceived after a hard night banging our heads against the grammatical wall. Nurturing and nudging each little noun or twisted adjective into line until they behave as we would like. "It's Alive" Good write, j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love your line from Colin Clive in Frankenstein...
thank you for your words, Ted,

read morelove your line from Colin Clive in Frankenstein...
thank you for your words, Ted,

j.

[barleygirl]

Very clever & even visual in the way we can envision the connections & the outcomes. The last line conveys the way we always feel this is the "BEST POEM EVER" right after we finish & we're still high on endorphins (& maybe a couple puffs) from shoving that baby out! *smile* (((HUGS)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we want to believe, don't we...oh the best ever...and then we look at it weeks later and pin prick lets the air out...

thank you, barleygirl...
j.

[Norman 223]

Loved the "progressive" development in this, Jacob. From small acorns, mighty oaks can grow.

N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Norman.

j.

[WittyWonka]

Congratulations on the birth of another piece! Do we get a cigar?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, cigars all around...thanks Witty.

j.

[Ruth]

This is so beautiful, pristinely so, there is no in-between here, all is a soft parade before my eyes, wonderful...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Poppy.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Clever piece as always. Churchill could have recited this wonderful write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew....:)))

[Alfred Kukitz]

WOW! A sweet charm that envelopes the heart. Thank you BIG for this one Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Bigger, for your kind words, Al.

j.

[Gee]

All is well thanks. Watching with amusement as Trump continues to show the world how detached his fathers money has made him from the real world.

[Gee]

In the hope of being eternally read. Hi Jacob, hope all is well stateside

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's what it is over here...election not withstanding...:)))

thanks for your words, Gee....and hope all is well with you...

j.